Just some points i think should be brought up, and i am providing links to wookieepedia referances where needed (to exact articles)
logic error #1: why, pray tell, is there a rebel cruiser orbiting yavin, it might be me but it seems to point out exactly where the reb base is, maybe just move it to circle a nearby planet or something.
#2: Stormies... yep stormies... i have a great many things to say about this but i would just point out that since rebs are still on yavin 4 the server's date is obvious BBY 1+ (before battle of yavin) and that said here's the referance article which i would advise stormies (present and future) should read..
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_troopers#3: before i pounce #3 could i get a clarification of what planets are considered 'neutral' planets?
more might show up later, should i encounter more things.